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Thursday, February 21, 2013

Movies in Brief

This Means War PG-13 Action /Adventure 120 min Two CIA Agents fight over Reese Witherspoon. In the form of Chris Pine and Tom Hardy. (See Mr. and Mrs. Smith but single.) The Vow PG-13 104 min Romantic Chick/Flick Rachel McAdams, Channing Tatum She is in accident. He must get her to fall in love with him again. (See 10 First Dates Meets Time Travlers Wife) The Big Miracle (PG) 123 minutes. Drew Barrymore, Kristen Bell Typical "Inspired By..." film with endangered species saved by cute kids in father only clan. (See a litany of similar films) Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close (PG-13) Tom Hanks and Sandra Bullock It already has an Oscar nod to it. The movie poster is stereo often-copied collage style design. This includes a rogue's gallery of supporting players and well-established critics boasts in center.

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm